The Fantasy Stories of Jordan E Kristofer
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Aspiring writer of fantasy short fiction.
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Greetings all!

Now that I've published the first novella, what now?

Well, work on the next installment is well underway. It'll start just days after the end of "Rise," and will follow Pel in his paladinal studies. My hope is to have it done before summer; ideally, I'd like to get 2 novels/novellas done this year, but we'll see -- no promises.

Further updates will come.

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The Story So Far

Greetings all!

So, it's been a long while since I posted here. Much has happened, but I'll give a tl;dr:
In July, I got a part-time job at a local supermarket to support my bills, making work on book 2 of the Sovereign Guardian trilogy slow.

During this time, my Locals has largely gone untouched -- or neglected, depending on your perspective. Thus, I'm going to try to post here more often with writing updates and some worldbuilding articles since Locals now allows for that. I don't know exactly how often I'll be posting, but it'll certainly be more often than now.

Meanwhile, if you have anything you'd like to know more about the first book Rise of the Sovereign Guardian or its world, leave a comment, and it might make its way into a future article or other post.

Take care, and I'll catch you next time.
o7

Long-awaited Update

Greetings all!

It's been a few years since my last post here. A lot has changed.

For one, the world of the two stories posted here has evolved and morphed since. Currently, I'm working on a pulp-like novella to introduce that world in full, as well as a few characters that will be followed in subsequent stories. I hope to have the novella fully published this month on Amazon. Once it is, I'll post the link.

Stay tuned.

Love's Awakening

An older story, but one that is foundational to a core character in the universe of my stories.

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Vedzryyf'len
On Their Design and Inspiration

Greetings all!

Not too long ago, I had someone reach out to me asking about the vedzryyf’len’s design. The inquirer asked if they were inspired by the Tieflings from D&D. Without much detail, I said no, stated their inspiration simply, and left it at that. However, this came to me as a probable conundrum: I imagine many readers will see them and say, “Oh, that’s just a blue tiefling.” Well, this post is here to set the record straight.

I will admit I have very little — almost none, in fact — interaction or experience with D&D proper. I have, however, had much and more experience with properties inspired by the game. One such property I have significant experience with is World of Warcraft.

Now, some of you may see the vedryyf’len, hear WoW, and immediately know what the inspiration is. For many others, I will explain.

     Official Draenei concept art

 

There is a race in Warcraft called the Draenei, a blue goat-like alien race from the planet Argus (later emigrating to Draenor, where they get their name). They were the first non-humanoid race for the Alliance faction, and I immediately fell in love with them. However, to adopt them myself, I decided to make them almost entirely human, completely removing the Draenei’s hooves, tail, and neck tendrils, leaving my non-human race with the horns, ears, and skin color.

My inception of this new race in the Sovereign Guardian remained largely with a different name, that of the Yr’ven, a word I completely made up that I would translate into “horned people”; the nynyr’ven mentioned in the book are the remnants of this word.

So, where did “vedzryyf’len” come from?

To understand that, I must introduce you to another MMO I am rather fond of: Black Desert Online.

Black Desert Online Class Tier List [Strongest and Weakest Classes ...
Black Desert Online’s Dark Knight class, a Vedir

 

BDO has elves which worship a goddess, and they are split into two subraces: the Ganelle who are descended from the sun, and the Vedir who are descended from the moon. When playing, I was drawn much more to the Vedir, given their history and willingness to do the unthinkable to save the world. Without delving too much into how exactly I did it, I derived the word “vedzryyf’len” from Vedir fairly simply and easily.

On top of this, the vedryyf’len inhabit a continent that has a massive tree in its center (if one recalls, the environment is referred to as “root jungles”). This, too, as well as their creation being from the moon, and that certain weapons are made from the tree which lies in their land’s center, was also pulled from BDO.

                A typical vedzryyf’len woman in Riahlish dress

 

But, that is where the similarities and inspirations end. The vedzryyf’len slave trade, their reproductive habits and rituals, their magic, are completely different from that of either the Draenei of WoW or the Vedir of BDO. The insights to those I reserve for the books, not here.

And there you have it: the origins of a prominent Sovereign Guardian race. There are more, of course, like the Gek’reken and those in the southern lands, but that’s for another time.

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